Someone wrote in [community profile] spr 2016-06-12 09:11 pm (UTC)

one?

"Thinking in a daze that she could remove on shutter, she thrust the knife into the gap."

should be:"Thinking in a daze that she could remove one shutter, she thrust the knife into the gap."
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