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touchturnfly) wrote in
spr2014-08-09 11:56 pm
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Admin Post: Tumblr sideblog + Seeking editors
EDIT: The break will be extended until further notice.
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You may leave a comment at the bottom of each (sub)-chapter, but mailing me is better (touchturnfly at gmail). There's no need to do it in order or to do everything at once. I will compare the edited text against the original for accuracy and change where needed. After you're done I will put the approved edited text into the post along with your name at the bottom.
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I'm still on a break, but I would like to take this moment to announce the existence of my new translation sideblog.
http://yonakayaku.tumblr.com/
I will be posting any updates to that tumblr. The actual novel translations will of course remain here.
Seeking editors
I mentioned before that the non-edited text doesn't read naturally enough. It's too literal. It needs to read like a story you'd find in a book. So I need some people willing to proofread the chapters I've translated. It would be great if you could help me out!
Your tasks:
- Grammar and spelling check
- Improve the readability (where needed: change phrasing, cut up long sentences, etc).
- Try to keep the original meaning of the translated text.
- If the meaning isn't clear or something doesn't make sense, please tell me.
You may leave a comment at the bottom of each (sub)-chapter, but mailing me is better (touchturnfly at gmail). There's no need to do it in order or to do everything at once. I will compare the edited text against the original for accuracy and change where needed. After you're done I will put the approved edited text into the post along with your name at the bottom.

Such an honor
-Me
Re: Such an honor
Thank you so much for offering! I have edited my post with more information and an example. Chapters 1 and 2 are ready to be edited. I will let you know when the others are ready.
Please do so when you have time! I'm in no particular hurry. :)
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(Anonymous) 2014-08-10 10:46 pm (UTC)(link)Wish I could help, but I am useless in that department.
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(Your pm box is closed so I left a comment here)